Velvet D'Coolette

Hi everyone!

 

I've started writing a fanfiction - it's about 10 chapters long at the moment and I've uploaded 3 of them - and thought I'd post a link to it here. Rated T for complex (as opposed to adult) themes.

 

http://www.fanfictio...ine's Adventure

 

Based on Season 1. Antoine has been in love with Sally for some time but the affection is never reciprocated. One night he takes a deadly risk to win her, only to be rescued by his rival Sonic. In the wake of this narrowly-avoided disaster Antoine seeks therapeutic help. This story follows his discoveries and healing with a counsellor. Psychological adventure.

Hi everyone.

 

First of all, I want to apologise because I feel like I don't contribute here any more. I occasionally come over, look at the topics, almost invariably realise there isn't anything productive I can say because it's about legal Sonic stuff or ongoing comics or gaming, and then I leave, rinse and repeat. I sort of feel like I sponge off this place, but that really isn't my intention.

 

Right okay. I've got that off my chest and welcome any responses to it. The other thing I came for was for exactly what my title says: I'd like three proof-readers. I'll be posting this same thread at SMS, so I'll take a total of three between the two forums. Assuming enough people are interested, of course.

 

The story I'd like you to proof-read is experimental. For anyone who has read Counselling For Toads, it's based on the same idea. It takes place over Season 1 of Sonic SatAM, telling bits of the story you're all familar with, but from a psycholotical perspective. However, the main focus is that Antoine goes for counselling.

 

I haven't finished it yet but I've got to a stage where I'd like feedback on the first half of the story. I'd like to hear some peoples' feedback so that I know whether it's interesting or not, whether the ideas in it are confusing or clear, whether the characterisation fits well enough, whether the pacing is too fast, too slow or just right... that kind of thing.

 

Would anyone be interested?

I wonder if anyone here would be able to help me?

I need to be able to upload large-size images (largest one I've got at the moment is 4,000 x 2,000 pixels but there'll be bigger ones) somewhere where they'll show up at full size. Trouble is, at least for now, I also need to be able to upload these for free.

I've already done a search for places that will do this. The best candidate I've found so far is Tumblr but even that's not bringing up the larger image as big as it really is.

...any ideas?

Thanks in advance to everyone who has a suggestion.

It's back!

For those of you who haven't read it, here's the story, reworked!

Story: The FFs are aged 12/13. Sally isn't sure where she really belongs in the group, but when a Mary Sue turns up out of nowhere, she finds that she's challenged even more. Or to read it another way, a Mary Sue bamfs into the Sonic SatAM world and finds that she just can't be pampered there the way she was back at home.

I've rewritten the first one and am posting it up one chapter per week. Two chapters are already up on Fanfiction.net but I won't upload chapter 3 onwards for another fortnight until the other places I'm uploading it (also one chapter per week) have caught up.

So I suppose this is the best place to put in a warning, which seemed the ideal thing to do over on SMS but I feel like I'm warning a crab that it's going to be poked by some fingers to you guys. There'll be a couple of swear-words, or more mild-to-moderate insults than swears, and the Mary Sue in question's a bit tarty, so if you're fazed by, 'look at my lovely boobs, look at my lovely bottom' then you might want to give it a miss. Overall I'd call the story PG-13.

Fanfiction.net - http://www.fanfictio...rate-Mary-Sue-1
DeviantArt - http://palantean.dev...t.com/#/d5txw15
FurAffinity - http://www.furaffini...t/view/9856304/ (no italics, but that's FA for you)
SoFurry - http://www.sofurry.com/view/497673

Soon I'd like to start up selling art commissions, mostly to the furry community if I can help it. Only, because my sign-in names on each furry site I'm at says I'm a writer (screen name is Palantean Writer) I think people will get confused and that might affect sales. Therefore I'm thinking of setting up a second account wherever I can with a less-confusing name.

I'm not sure what to call myself. What does everyone think of these names? Which one do you lot think I should go for?

The Pig Ones
Pigasso
Andy Warthog
Salvaboar Dali

The Rodent Ones
Rembrat
Degu Rivera

The Feline Ones
Van-Cat Gough
Lionado da Vinci
Catisse
Clawed Monet

The Avian Ones
Swanatello
Wrenoir
Van Chough

Other
Toumoose-Lautrec