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@  furrykef : (24 July 2015 - 11:25 AM)

Also I still have to figure out how to set up our e-mail accounts on the new host.

@  furrykef : (24 July 2015 - 08:19 AM)

As soon as I figure out how to restore it. Sorry, I know I said it'd be done by now, but I didn't expect to have to put up with this DNS crap and other issues that popped up.

@  Uncle Ben : (24 July 2015 - 07:56 AM)

So when's the black theme coming back??

@  Uncle Ben : (24 July 2015 - 07:56 AM)

"Should"

@  furrykef : (24 July 2015 - 07:27 AM)

That DNS took longer to propagate properly than I thought it would. *Now* we should be back for good, though.

@  furrykef : (23 July 2015 - 08:48 PM)

Or it might be because Bluehost *finally* got around to that server wipe (one week after we'd asked for it) and that wiped out our DNS settings. I'm not sure which and I don't really care. In any case, we've severed our last ties with Bluehost, so this will not happen again.

@  furrykef : (23 July 2015 - 08:08 PM)

Looks like Bluehost yanked our DNS since our hosting account expired. That's why the site went down a while ago. But as you can see, it's fixed now.

@  Misk : (23 July 2015 - 04:55 PM)

No, they do not.

@  furrykef : (23 July 2015 - 04:27 AM)

The goggles do nothing?

@  Misk : (22 July 2015 - 05:50 PM)

My eyes.

@  furrykef : (22 July 2015 - 12:24 PM)

Looks like forum uploads might have been broken since last night. That should be fixed now too.

@  furrykef : (22 July 2015 - 01:33 AM)

Heh, whoops! Server went down for a few mins when I borked the config. Looks like it's back up now.

@  Uncle Ben : (21 July 2015 - 09:09 PM)

It looked like a napkin

@  ILOVEVHS : (21 July 2015 - 09:04 PM)

Fan-fuckin-tastic.

@  furrykef : (21 July 2015 - 08:25 PM)

As for the beaver picture while the forum was down, I think Tim drew it. On a napkin.

@  furrykef : (21 July 2015 - 08:24 PM)

No kiddin' about that "Finally!", Shadow. I am *so mad* at Bluehost for never responding to our support ticket. I submitted it early Friday morning and they *still* haven't answered it!

@  Uncle Ben : (21 July 2015 - 06:37 PM)

Maybe he did that himself

@  Shadow : (21 July 2015 - 05:25 PM)

Say, who made the cute picture of Beaver Chief?

@  Shadow : (21 July 2015 - 05:24 PM)

Finally!

@  RedMenace : (21 July 2015 - 05:02 PM)

Woooo! The site's back up! Three cheers for Kef!


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A Writing Question: No Audience Surrogate


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#1 Misk

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Posted 01 April 2015 - 12:50 AM

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The question: How do you do exposition without an audience surrogate?

Details/Situation/Context: I'm working on a writing project and I've run into a little problem. It's not really Sonic related, but rather something original, though it can apply to anything, including fanfics. I have a fantasy world I'd like to introduce, but there's a problem. I prefer to write in first person as I feel it better shows what a character is thinking or feeling at any given time. This isn't a problem by itself, but neither of my main points of views can function as the audience surrogate, (read: the character who knows as little as the audience and asks questions the audience wants to know) as both of them haved lived in this world their entire lives so they don't exactly have a reason to have things explained to them.

 

How do you relay critical setting information to the audience without someone who can ask questions?



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Posted 01 April 2015 - 01:39 AM

Well, if your story's in the first person, consider who exactly the narrator is meant to be telling the story to. If he's narrating the story to someone who wouldn't already know a certain detail, why not just have him explain it?

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Posted 01 April 2015 - 06:18 AM

Well, if your story's in the first person, consider who exactly the narrator is meant to be telling the story to. If he's narrating the story to someone who wouldn't already know a certain detail, why not just have him explain it?

I've considered this, though it seems to matter who is speaking just as much. Weirdly enough I find that it would be out of character for them to stop and explain something, even while narrating. Some characters can do it just fine, but others it doesn't seem like it'd work as well.



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Posted 04 April 2015 - 12:03 AM

I've written an entire novel in first person plus present tense, so I know a thing or two about this very subject. Fffffun! :D

And I mean fun, at least for me. The secret is experience. To experience the world from your character's point of view, wether he be good or bad, lol.

When we see the world, our brains are always analyzing everything and relating it to something we've experienced, even if it's subconscious. Much of the first person is largely subconscious analysis. If you can do that, not only are you explaining the environment, but by relating it to past things you're building the history at the same time.

Let's say there's a guy going through a mundane day, the ultimate non analysis routine. How do you explain what he's doing when it's all the same to him, right? You'll likely need to create a situation that sparks a line of thought.

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I didn't even hear the ring. I forgot what the alarm's tone sounded like. By the time my grey slippers hit the square doorframe, I couldn't even remember the color of my room. I think it was...blue.

Next moment I knew, my face was cold. I found myself face to face with a milk carton in the pale fridge. The Umata knew how to build their houses. Simple. Simple and pure, in every form, help keep your feet moving without any whatsits in the way. Who needs a television when you work? Who needs a new toy when the old isn't broken? Are we....?

...Mmm, I tasted cereal. I took a gander down and my hand ablidged to deliver the milk soaked cereal from stainless steel bowl to my ready mouth. My hand smelled like the chilling metal table.

My house smelled like garbage.

...Garbage? My body snapped out from my clockwork stare to find the garbage can.

Nothing picked up my garbage. My eyes blinked, as I realized I'd have to find out what happened to the company garbage bot.

I sank it into memory, slipped back into my clockwork routine befo...oh. I had already eaten my cereal.

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This is just something I wrote very quick, but an example. Someone loosing their humanity almost to routine, in a mundane world. If that can be written interestingly, you can certainly find a way to make your world very interesting. Even if it's something he's seen a thousand times, then it has history. Let that history cross his mind. Recall previous times he's had with that particular place, person, or thing.


I know what you'll ask. What if he doesn't notice something, or simply doesn't understand what he's looking at? Then don't write about it. Focus on what your character notices and what your character understands, then flesh it out by his Persona experience and USING ALL FIVE SENSES.

Your biggest tool. ALL FIVE SENSES. Smell, taste, touch...experience the world through that character's senses to build it. First person is less about the explanation and more about the experience.



As much as I understand this, I know it can be a difficult concept to really grasp, so if you have further questions, please ask. ^^;

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