Given that I've now finished what Stranger has so far and shouldn't take more than a day to finish giving him feedback, who wants me to look at their work next?
Please bear in mind that if you ask for feedback on your story I'd appreciate it if you provided the same for mine. It's been nearly a week since I posted the chapter and I've received no comments whatsoever pertaining to the story itself, which is admittedly a bit disheartening. I'm not asking for a scholarly review, just a few paragraphs (though more would certainly be welcome and reciprocated in turn).
Feedback from VHS would also be nice, given that I already reviewed his story several months ago.
My review for you is almost done as well. I just won't have wi-fi for awhile 'cause of the move. Have to stick to my I-phone.
And VHS is probably just oblivious...or selfishly lazy... *Laughs but then gives a serious glare* VHS, you owe Sorzo (and me but I will let that slide). Sorzo, PM him personally about it first from now on. I propose that to be a future rule to avoid any public tension. If one doesn't give back tha person will be privately warned.
Let's be gentle on Ben though. He has a concussion. He is most likely going to give you a B/5 on your review.
Ben owes me one, but I am letting that slide. I plan to rewrite the big review I gave him soon.
Note that when someone gives you a review and you do not follow suit without a good reason, guys, you'll get a demerit on your part of the membership section. There will be accountability, reciprocation, and mutual respect in this group. The more you help the more accolade you receive and thus more signs pointing out your dependability and trust. Sorzo gets a merit on the title section for his contributions as a "Trusted Reviewer." I will updating the By-laws soon to show this.Thoughts?
Red, would you like to be the final call on ratings (NSFW/Mature/ Teen/All-Ages?)
