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[TheRedStranger]

 

 Very much a Jakie-Chan type of quirky comic fighter that still is very jumpy and protective.

 

 

Uncle Chuck: *Smacks Antoine across the head* One more thing!

 

 

Dépêchez-vous Uncle! Amy's in trouble, again.

[TheRedStranger]

"I met a maiden

With crimson hair

Tail was short

Her fur was fair.

Eyes like sky

And smile white

Tough a lass

She had mans' might.

 

 I met a lord

Whose fur was blue

His feet were swift

His heart was true

His fists were gloved

In Guantlet white

They hit so swift

Like thunder-light.

 

And together two

Legends say

Will someday

Burn out the gray

O' smog and steel

Do beware..

Robotnik quake

In despair

For Sonic comes

And lady fair

Freedom Fighters

Hearts aflare!

 

 They'll burn away

Robotnik's scorn

And restore the throne

To rightful borne

So, all hail the house!

Of King Acorn!"

 

Oh yeah! I just got all Tolkien on yo' butts!  

[scififry]

Pretty good writing, keep up the good work!

 

I'd be grateful if you could avoid some of those bigger spelling/word errors, though. I usually read in my spare time and don't always get what's intended to be meant when I'm tired...

 

The music's pretty impressive and fitting too. I like how the re-incarnation of the Dr. Robotnik theme from the show has turned out.

Good speakers do a better job than any headphones ever could, though.

[TheRedStranger]

Pretty good writing, keep up the good work!

 

I'd be grateful if you could avoid some of those bigger spelling/word errors, though. I usually read in my spare time and don't always get what's intended to be meant when I'm tired...

 

The music's pretty impressive and fitting too. I like how the re-incarnation of the Dr. Robotnik theme from the show has turned out.

Good speakers do a better job than any headphones ever could, though.

 

Thanks for your kind words.

[TheRedStranger]

So, I want to do something fun with guys.

I want you to name some of your favorite issues and episodes from your choicest Sonic media. I reall am interested in what people particularly find memorable and love about the series from their own perspective (beyond my own views). I hope to reconstruct some of these plots for future episodes of EoT. Also try to mention issues an episodes you liked but were flawed and new improvement. I see this a challange as a writer to make a better story.

Ready? Go.

[scififry]

Thanks for your kind words.

You're welcome.

 

Sally: '[...]any questions?' - Antoine: 'Oh my Princess you're being so too beautifully today!' - Bunnie: 'Oh Antoine that's not even a question'.

Antoine annoys me almost as much as Dulcy's 'xyz, ma', but I always love him being put down by the other characters. Which reminds me...(from Sonic Boom): Sonic: 'What happened, Ant?!' - 'Well, Cat said I should lean against the-' - 'Yo, where's Cat?'

And of course not to forget the interrogation/torture scene in Spyhog - 'MARGARINE!' - 'Oh, you would make Escargot with margarine, you're being much to cruel, you fuel!!!', which also reminds me of the Ant/Rotor scene from Hooked on Sonics with the fuel dialogue - 'Oh, you mean a fool!'.

 

Now I've written so much about Antoine...probably because those moments are the most memorable ones...also a classical Sally/Sonic moment is when NICOLE malfunctioned and displayed a giant hologram of a chili dog, Sonic almost falls trying to grab it and Sally saying something like 'NICOLE's malfunctioning' and Sonic commenting 'A chili dog is not a malfunction'.

[TheRedStranger]

Oh you are going to see some good return to form with the Margarine and chili-dog jokes. One involving margarine finding it's way in Antoine's morning tea.

[scififry]

Definitely looking forward to that; I love Antoine's tidy order of things being messed with!

[TheRedStranger]

I have been working real hard with my Creative Consultance for the story as a whole. So far over Three "Seasons" of material have been outlined. 

 

 Chapter Four will be coming real soon.

[Uncle Ben]

Am i one of these 'consultants'

[TheRedStranger]

Am i one of these 'consultants'

 

You are. I thought you knew.

[TheRedStranger]

Merry ChristisLordandIdon'tgiveasquataboutKnwanzamas! 

 

More Music!

 

https://soundcloud.c.../sonic-sabotage

 

Also, more in depth reworking of the first chapter.

 

Oh! And some upcoming chapter, and previews, previews, previews!)

[Uncle Ben]

You forgot Fetivus

[TheRedStranger]

You forgot Fetivus

 

I refuse to buy Aluminum Poles and cave into commercial pressure.

 

 Actually this year I reconstructed old family photos of lost loved ones and key events and made sentimental art for all my friends...Memories mean more than material.

 

Hope you like the new edit and music.

[TheRedStranger]

To celebrate my 1000 post I did this. Mike Arcade told me I should do a concept piece fot EoT music and sound wise wise, so I did.

 

Listen on SoundCloud.com

[TheRedStranger]

So far my consultancy and I have nearly 1000 pages of rough draft material. Enough for several multi-part episodes. We are finalizing the drafts soon. After we work on a lot of long-term continuity development we plan to hunker down on the first two episodes. So expect a lot more this Spring and Summer. 

 

In other news I will be posting some art work of EoT Super-Sonic soon as well as some more music!

[RedAuthar]

I should actually re read some of your stuff....I can't remember what was going on with it when I last read it.

[Captain Sorzo]

Finally finished going through what you have so far. Hopefully I'll have my feedback ready by the end of the day. I'll PM it to you first, Stranger, though if you're comfortable I'd like to post at least some of it in this thread. While having all of the peer reviewing happen behind closed doors ensures confidentiality, it doesn't do much to promote group discussion. That applies to everyone's work, my own included.

[ZealousFoX]

I made this for you Stranger I hope you enjoy.

 

[TheRedStranger]

I made this for you Stranger I hope you enjoy.

 

 

 

Thanks a bunch man! Also want people to know I have a lot, a lot, a lot of new content on the backburner I might be showing soon - music, text previews, art, the works. We've just been finalizing the outlines and planning ahead so we never really run out of content to trickle down weekly to you guys later on.