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[Velvet D'Coolette]

It's back!

For those of you who haven't read it, here's the story, reworked!

Story: The FFs are aged 12/13. Sally isn't sure where she really belongs in the group, but when a Mary Sue turns up out of nowhere, she finds that she's challenged even more. Or to read it another way, a Mary Sue bamfs into the Sonic SatAM world and finds that she just can't be pampered there the way she was back at home.

I've rewritten the first one and am posting it up one chapter per week. Two chapters are already up on Fanfiction.net but I won't upload chapter 3 onwards for another fortnight until the other places I'm uploading it (also one chapter per week) have caught up.

So I suppose this is the best place to put in a warning, which seemed the ideal thing to do over on SMS but I feel like I'm warning a crab that it's going to be poked by some fingers to you guys. There'll be a couple of swear-words, or more mild-to-moderate insults than swears, and the Mary Sue in question's a bit tarty, so if you're fazed by, 'look at my lovely boobs, look at my lovely bottom' then you might want to give it a miss. Overall I'd call the story PG-13.

Fanfiction.net - http://www.fanfictio...rate-Mary-Sue-1
DeviantArt - http://palantean.dev...t.com/#/d5txw15
FurAffinity - http://www.furaffini...t/view/9856304/ (no italics, but that's FA for you)
SoFurry - http://www.sofurry.com/view/497673