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Showcasing A Really Good Fan-Fiction
#1
Posted 16 October 2012 - 05:56 PM
If you haven't heard of it, I'll give you the skinny. I'll try not to give away too many spoilers though, and beware, as not all Sonic fans will like this story.
Tails builds a teleporter powered by a Chaos Emerald. The machine fails to work and he is actually turned into a girl! (That isn't even the strangest thing that happens.) He (or she) wants to turn normal again, as she is now feeling certain impulses, instincts or emotions he isn't used to. However, she is conflicted, as she and Sonic are beginning to fall in love.
For a fan-fiction, this is quite true to the storylines of the games, and the characters fit their actual personalities. Also, the romance is believable and when you think about it, this would probably happen if the story was somehow implemented into the games. The author does a great job of telling the story, despite her learning disorder (she can't write well, but she still tells great stories.
Now this is all my opinion,but I encourage you guys to read it. Let me and the author Tailsic know what you guys think.
Here is the link:
http://www.fanfictio...hen_Friends_Now

"Everyone creates the thing that they dread. Men of peace create engines of war. Invaders create Avengers. People create... smaller people...? CHILDREN! (chuckles) Lost the word there..."
#2
Posted 16 October 2012 - 07:37 PM
#3
Posted 16 October 2012 - 07:42 PM
A hypothetical situation like that would be difficult to write but you did a pretty good job on it. Though it is a very weird concept (which i hope never happens in the games casue that would create a ton of problems) the way you wrote it was good. It could of been longer and Amy couldda snapped sooner, but i think it was pretty good
I would give it a 3.5/5.
#4
Posted 16 October 2012 - 08:53 PM
Just to let you know there is a section in the forums for fan fics. its in the creative corner
Indeed, it should be. Moved.
No worries, though.
#5
Posted 16 October 2012 - 08:59 PM
#6
Posted 17 October 2012 - 07:42 AM

"Everyone creates the thing that they dread. Men of peace create engines of war. Invaders create Avengers. People create... smaller people...? CHILDREN! (chuckles) Lost the word there..."
#7
Posted 17 October 2012 - 07:48 AM
#8
Posted 17 October 2012 - 07:59 AM
Great! Thanks dude, I owe ya one. Can I delete this one?Dont worry we already Moved it. I have my own thats a work in progress on the creative corner page.

"Everyone creates the thing that they dread. Men of peace create engines of war. Invaders create Avengers. People create... smaller people...? CHILDREN! (chuckles) Lost the word there..."
#9
Posted 17 October 2012 - 08:01 AM
#10
Posted 17 October 2012 - 08:11 AM
No this is the one we moved. Its on the creative corner page. Its all set, we take care of everyone here. But check mine out too
Maybe I will! Thanks!

"Everyone creates the thing that they dread. Men of peace create engines of war. Invaders create Avengers. People create... smaller people...? CHILDREN! (chuckles) Lost the word there..."
#11
Posted 17 October 2012 - 08:12 AM
Also tagged with one or more of these keywords: Sonic, Tails, Fan-Fiction, Showcase
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