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The revised version is up

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Chapter 2!!

[Uncle Ben]

gonna mix it up. Gonna post a preview on Thursday night. Its a brand new chapter that doesnt involve the stuff i already wrote earlier in this topic. It will provide a backstory on how Ben got the mission and how he found out about Eggmans plans

[Uncle Ben]

ok so finals and last minute work has made me delay the preview so it should be up tomorrow or friday morning

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Preview time!! Full chapter out tomorrow. (This is probably a 1/6th of the chapter


Ben walks back to his barracks and grabs his gear that he will need. He’s trying to figure out who would want to go towards that outpost and what would they be looking for. The fact the outpost in question is just nothing more than a safe house if anything. Most of the outposts were just safe houses for when the weather is bad or someone in suspicion was on their tail. Nevertheless Ben got ready and met the rest of the squad at the point and they set off to Twinleaf.

“So why would Overlanders attack a settlement? I mean this conflict basically over now.” asked said the white Labrador. As they begin walking down the road.

“Who’s to say its Overlanders, Shaymus? For all we know is that it could be bandits or some mercenary squad that attacked Twinleaf.” Raymond replied.

“Still. We have the best track record in the Marines, isn’t sending us a bit of a waste of good resources?” Shaymus replied.

“Well if they send us the mission will be successful. If they were to send someone else it could lead to disaster, laddie” the Scottish Terrier said.

“Yea I understand that William, but what if it’s just nothing? What if it’s a bunch of kids who was just messin’ around?” Shaymus said

“What if it is Overlanders, I mean a building was destroyed and the town wasn’t even involved with The Great War, so what’s the point in attacking a town that had no involvement at all?” The German Sheppard added in.

“That’s something to think about Tommy. The town has been neutral with no involvement whatsoever. So attacking the town they either had bad intel. or they couldn’t tell what they were doing. What do you think Jackson?” Shaymus asked.

“I’m not sure. It could be anything.” Jackson replied

“I hope its Overlanders, I wanna get into a fight.” Carol asked.

“We are not to engage them unless they attack us Carol.” Raymond said. “Remember our orders to investigate what happened and go from there.”

“Stop being a softy Raymond. You’re a freaking Master Sargent, act like one instead of being cautious all the time.”

“I’m just following orders and you are supposed to do the same.” Raymond snapped back.

“Lock it down, both of you.” Ben turned around and said to them.

“Sorry Ben” Both Raymond and Carol said to him at the same time.

“We are here.” Ben said as an older looking Deer walks up to him. Twinleaf resembles a Western like settlement with one main street with stores and houses along the road. There are two side streets that lead to two ranches. They see some of the damage in the town from the store that was destroyed and several damaged buildings.

[RedAuthar]

Now you make me feel bad for not making progress on mine.

[Uncle Ben]

The only reason why i procrastinated was cause of finals and a freakin' blizzard. You work so you have a legit excuse

anyways how do you like the preview

[RedAuthar]

Yeah....but work only takes up about 9 hours of my day. I could still have gotten more stuff done.

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Chapter 3!!

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So this is something different. I recently made 2 rants on the Anti-Archie Sonic page on DeviantART and i feel like sharing them

http://my.deviantart...-Arcs-360495535

http://anti-archie-s...stuff-357613199

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Hey guess what!! Chapter 4!!

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[ILOVEVHS]

Ben the Wolf?

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Isnt it obvious?? Truthfully i actually didnt have him in there at first but the story seemed to flow better with him in it

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Anyways how do you like it VHS?

[ILOVEVHS]

I will share my opinion once I have read every current chapter, thank you very much.

[Uncle Ben]

Right.

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Soon... hopefully saturday (atleast a preview)

[Uncle Ben]

Preview time. And as a bonus there will be another one later this week, Note there will be A LOT more detail for now on.

On another side of Mobius, there is a rather small one-floor house in the middle of a rather dark forest big enough for one, maybe two people. It well kept and looks like it was built recently, rather that it was or maybe the owner took really good care of it. The house blends in with the dark atmosphere of the forest. Perhaps this person was hiding from someone, or something. Eggman’s hovercraft is seen descending from the sky above to the outside of the house. He steps off and looks around, proceeding towards the door. He knocks rather hard on the door, any harder and the door could have been unhinged.

“Just a minute.” The voice says on the other side. “Who could it possibly be, interrupting my…” he mumbles as he opens the door. It was Snivley, Eggman’s nephew who he hasn’t seen in years after Snivley ran off after Eggman was fed up with his “incompetence.” The moment he saw Eggman’s face he lets out a loud shriek that scared all the animals within a quarter mile radius and began cowering in fear. This was a very unhappy reunion for Snivley as the moment he saw his face the years of physical, mental and psychological abuse came back to him. After nearly three years away from Eggman, he thought he was finally away from his “miserable Uncle.”

“Snivley, you are coming with me.” Eggman said in his dark tone. He wanted his nephew to work for him again, considering how Orbot and Cubot was left behind by Eggman and hasn’t been seen since. He knew Snivley would be better than rebuilding them, searching for them in space or perhaps even a new robot to help him. He didn’t have time to so his thought process was to find his estranged nephew and put him under his wing again. Eggman was sure that he was going to succeed but he will need an assistant for his new “Eggman Empire” to make sure things ran smoothly.

“No.” Snivley said stomping his foot on the ground, taking a stand against his uncle. He wasn’t going to be pushed around anymore and he wasn’t going to go back as a workhorse for Eggman. That stand didn’t last long as Eggman picks up Snivley by the collar and puts his face up to his so they can see eye to eye.

“You are coming with me Snivley, you’re going to help me with my Eggman Empire.” Eggman said with a snarl. Snivley saw the evil in his eye, even though he was wearing his sunglasses. Snivley began shaking violently in Eggman’s hands. He’s still afraid of his uncle. He thought he was over it during his time in solitude but it seems that some wounds cut deeper than he thought. He wanted to say no but he felt he had no choice, as if he was powerless.

“I… don’t… yes sir.” Snivley said unsure of himself but he felt he couldn’t do much. He wanted to do something but he wasn’t in any position to do so for the fear of being hurt by Eggman. After he said that Eggman began dragging him back towards his hovercraft. “Where are we going to do now sir?” he asked weakly as he is being put in a rather unsafe position on the hovercraft.

“To get rid of a few thorns in my side now so I will have no opposition this time.” Eggman said. Something seemed different about him this time. Usually, mostly in recent memory, he seemed like a bumbling idiot that was just full of himself. This time however he seemed more sinister; perhaps he returning to his old roots where he was much darker and more of a threat. In truth Eggman, realized that he was being to passive his schemes; he had to be much more aggressive and not care about the damages he can and probably will cause. He realized that considering years ago he blew up half of the moon and fragmented Mobius itself to building an “amusement park” to take over the world using power of the Wisps. Eggman was bent on turning it up and torch and burn whoever got in his way. They then ascend into the skies above and go away from the area as the house blows up. Eggman planted a bomb there when Snivley was not looking and when he was cowering in fear as leverage so Snivley couldn’t possibly leave him for a second time. As black smoke fills the air in the area around them they return to Eggman’s central command ship.

[Uncle Ben]

Another preview?? Why not?? (Before you ask if its revelant, i wouldnt put it in there if it wasnt relveant to the story later on)

“Of Course.” Ben replies with a chuckle. “If I didn’t have hot dogs to make some chili dogs you’d be cross with me for the next week.” Ben and Sonic begin to laugh as Tails starts taking some of the hot dogs and begins to lightly cook them on the fire. “Hey Tails don’t cook those too long cause we are putting them in the chili later.”

“Okay” Tails replied. “Hey Ben??”

“Yea Tails??” Ben replied taking off his sunglasses for the day.

“You’ve been all around the world right? Do you have any interesting stories to share?”

Ben laughs a little and turns to Tails. “I’m hardly an old man returning from a life at sea or after a long journey Tails.” Ben says chuckling.

“But you must have some stories right Ben?” Sonic asked.

“I may have a few. There are some experiences worth retelling I suppose” Ben muttered.

“What has the biggest battle you were...” Tails began to ask.

Ben quickly cuts off Tails before he can finish “Don’t even try, as of right now I’m taking that one to my grave.” Ben snapped at Tails. “There are some fights solders don’t talk about and for me; the Battle of Kairslan is that one.”

“That bad huh??” Sonic said.

“You haven’t the slightest idea, Sonic.” Ben muttered. “Tails toss me the hot dogs.” Tails hands them to Ben and he puts them in the pot.

“Well do you have any interesting battles or missions you were in?” Tails asked.

“Well this one time we were asked to protect this diplomat’s daughter, her name was Katherine I think, cute fox girl, and she was hitting on me but I had to keep my mind on the job which is something you cant mix.” Ben began has he lets the chili dogs cook and takes a seat, looking at Sonic at his last remark as a jab at him.

“Funny.” Sonic quipped.

Ben laughs for a second and strokes the fire. “Anyways so a group of mercenaries were being paid to kidnap her to use her as leverage against her father so they can have more freedoms and be above the law and all that bad rap.” Ben continued. “So our job was to move her from one town to another, I think they were on their way to Knothole I don’t really remember all the details it was a few months ago. Anyways we had to stop at this town for the night cause he thought it would be better to stop and rest.”

“I guess it wasn’t the best idea?” Tails asked.

“Yea but that’s later in the story.” Ben answered. “So the way sentry duty was set up was we all draw straws for who guards her room, the perimeter of the hotel we were staying at and some walk around the area undercover. We had to tighten security in the area and had to partially shut down the place for safety concerns and all that. So we all draw straws…”

“Let me guess, you had to stay with her didn’t you?” Sonic said cutting off Ben before he could finish.

“Just my luck right?” Ben answered. “Yea so I had to stay with her in the room. Normally I wouldn’t mind but as I said she was hitting on me and making advances on me. I told her several times that it’s not the right time and place for all that.”

“Did she stop?” Tails asked

“She toned it down a bit.” Ben answered. “So she was about to go to sleep so I made sure everything was safe in her room, which at the time was safe. I heard a knock on the door and it was someone from the hotel giving her something she asked for earlier. So he walks in and I check up on her.”

“It was one of the mercenaries wasn’t it?” Sonic said.

“Turns out the hotel were actually a front for their base of operations.” Ben muttered. “So the whole place knew she was there so they sent one of their best to kidnap her. So I walked in with my magnum drawn because he was very suspicious, he got a hold of her and had her at knifepoint and used her as a human shield. The guys says to me: ‘Walk away now, She’s ours now’ along with other stuff that Tails probably shouldn’t hear.”

“I want to know what he said.” Tails replied

“Trust me Tails you don’t. It’s things a ten-year-old shouldn’t hear.” Ben said. “A lot of the stuff he said was VERY graphic. So I look around to see if there was a way I could disarm him without hurting her. I notice a heating vent near him and a pipe that looked ready to crack. So I take a shot at the pipe and hit it causing it to break hitting the guy in the face with hot steam. I then kick him out through the window.”

“Quick thinking Ben.” Sonic said praising Ben.

“Situations like that you can find a way get out of it if you look hard enough.” Ben said. “So we had to get her out of there so I radioed in my squad to help us get out of there. We exited the room and there were two more outside and apparently their orders were to get rid me. One of them swung at me and I garbed his hand, pooped his arm out and threw him over my shoulder and then the other one tried kicking me so I grabbed his foot and flipped him over. He happened to be near a staircase so he fell down the stairs.”

“Were they sending in everyone?” Tails asked.

“It looked like it cause Raymond radioed in that there were a lot outside. So we went out the back and we were being chased through the forest. They were cut off so we were on our own. We ran through the forest on our own and about several of them were chasing after us. It really was a bad situation.”

“You two were on your own?” Sonic asked.

“Yea.” Ben replied. “While we were running she tripped and fell on a root. I ran back picked her up and piggybacked her for a long distance. We were able to get away but we were stuck in the forest. I think they got lost as well. We eventually found a lake in the forest and we camped there for the night. The last radio contact I heard from Raymond was that they apprehended the ones they faced and they were coming to look for us next.”

“So what about the guys that were chasing you? What happened to them?” Tails asked

“Well we stopped at the lake to rest. So a few moments later their second-in-command Klaus showed up. He was the one who was chasing us through the forest. The others were sent back by whoever was in charge because he thought Klaus would be able to dispatch me. Now this guy was a huge and he cocky. He comes up to me and says: ‘Nice try, but this girl is coming with me. She is our ticket for us doing what we want when we want without the law harassing us. Know this: the Shadow Claws will become the most powerful group and your sorry excuse for Marines cant do anything about it.’ He walks past me and I grab him and tell him: ‘Not in this lifetime. Justice will prevail like always. I’m giving you a warning: Leave now and I’ll let it slide.’

“He didn’t leave did he?” Sonic asked

“Nope. He swung at me.” Ben answered. “He has a nasty left hook. He nailed me and I leg swept him and punching him. He rolled out of the way and swept me. I kicked up as he got up and tried for a left hook again. I caught his hand, which still pushed me back a bit, and I put him in an arm bar. He then grabbed me and put me into an arm bar. He left his whole midsection open so I saw the opportunity and gave him an uppercut. Now even though he’s a big guy I lifted him off of his feet. He landed and tackled me to the ground and began to wail at me. I was able to block each punch but those hits were taking a toll on me. Katherine then jumped on him to get him to stop. He got off and pushed her to the ground.”

“That’s not cool.” Tails said.

“No kidding. You NEVER hit a girl.” Ben said shaking his head as he began to take the chilidogs out of the pot and gives two each to Sonic and Tails and begins eating one. “So I saw this and that just set me off. My eyes turned red, as you guys have seen, and I dropkicked him. He was about to feel a world of hurt. I grabbed him and threw him face first into a tree and bounced his head off the tree. He was still standing so I hip tossed him into the ground and gave him a good punch to the face and he was down for the count. I settle down afterwards and rolled him out of there for his buddies to find. I checked up on her and she was fine. She thanked me for protecting her and she kissed me, something I didn’t expect. So about and hour later Raymond and the rest showed up about an hour and a half later. At that time I was lying down against a tree while her head was resting on my stomach. Immediately they thought something was going on which nothing was going on. So we all camped out in the forest that night and we safely brought her to Knothole the next morning, mission accomplished.”

“So what happened to the mercenaries base of operations in the hotel?” Sonic asked.

“We went back two days later to clear out the building and hopefully apprehend the Shadow Claw’s leader, which would have been grand since no one knew who he was and all of his or her employees are tight lipped about it.” Ben began again. “The entire place was cleared out. We searched the entire place top to bottom and found a few hidden areas but the whole place was empty until we got to the basement where a note saying ‘You got lucky this time Ben but next time will be different’ signed by GMC.”

“GMC?” Tails asked.

“Grand Master Claw as he or she calls themselves.” Ben answered. “So it was successful but we all wished they’d were still there and kill two birds with one stone. General Alvakirk and Commander D’Coolette thought we did an excellent job for protecting her and flushing out the Shadow Claws from the area in the process and of course General Yukon thought it was ‘sloppy and you could of apprehended GMC.’”

“He’s never satisfied in anything you do is he?” Sonic asked.

“You can say that again.” Ben muttered as he was rolling his eyes. “But what was strange is that the only ones who knew the path we were taking, where we were and where we were staying was us, the generals and Armand.”

“You think Yukon set you up?” Sonic asked.

“I wouldn’t be surprised if he did.” Ben answered. “There was something off about him ever since I joined up. But that’s my story for the night. Even when things went bad we still got out of it cause we can prevail. Also another moral of the story was if someone hits a girl they deserve the crap kicked out of them.”

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Its Out!!! (Yes i split it into two parts

Part A: http://uncleben59.de...uncleben59&qo=1

Part B: http://uncleben59.de...10%3A1367351235