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[Robthe1st]

This is the story I wrote... well, if you click this page, all you can read is a short plot I wrote. So... read it and tell me what you think. I still got an long way go to write... enjoy!

Sonic Freedom:

UPDATE: Check my short plot down below somewhere. Also, my fanfic script well be posted here sooner.

[RedAuthar]

Looks fairly interesting. Let's see where it goes.

[Robthe1st]

Looks fairly interesting. Let's see where it goes.

Glad you like the story! It may be short plot, but I'll write the episode 1 in the near future. I'm looking for a artists so I can put the logo and the fan art characters in that link. If you're a great artists that would like to help me.. think about it!

[RedAuthar]

I don't exactly claim to be great, but I can draw.

[Robthe1st]

I don't exactly claim to be great, but I can draw.

That's alright. Do you have a web site that shows your art / drawings?

[RedAuthar]

Here are some links to a few samples.
http://img201.images...39/snydley2.png
http://img708.images...lytv2point2.png
http://mnw.thecomics.../cast/iraku.png
http://mnw.thecomics...21796315482.png
http://fc00.devianta...ann-d4ik99x.png
http://ultimatefar.t...b1622092243.png
http://ultimatefar.t...ne_the_wolf.png

[Robthe1st]

In case most of you didn't read my story, because my link has been gone, here it goes:

Plot Summary: A new villain approaches, name: Clawness and his female servant Bodhi, traveling around planet Freedom, to search for the millions of dark blood elements, that gives dark hidden high supernatural powers. Elsewhere, a young short anthropomorphism videx (Which is party fox) and a teenage prodigy, whose also a spiritual traveling warrior named: Zugo, is traveling around planet Freedom to search for the dark blood elements to destroyed them before his enemies reach them. Zugo bumps into the freedom fighters he never meet: Sonic the Hedgehog, Princess Sally Acorn from Mobius, and also Bunnie
“Annie” Rabbot. They decides to help Zugo to travel around the planet to help Zugo’s quest to get rid of the millions of dark blood elements before Clawness and his rest of his villainous get their hands on it; While traveling planet Freedom, Sonic joins the Sanskrit Bonitas Venators (Means: Spiritual Bounty Hunters) a private group of non-supernatural hunters, search for wanted sinners that use the supernatural powers that they’ve taken and sucking the powers life of the tree of deus (means God); Bunnie spit off for herself so she can traveling alone to search for the dark blood elements. She interferes with a new character named: Ramco. A young adult hobbit, short but whose bad attitude, and quite more mature. Is a swordsman and a regular bounty hunter. Bunnie and Ramco don’t seem to quite along, but, they must join forces to find the dark blood elements as Sonic, Sally, Zugo and the others do.

BTW, let me know if there's any errors in my story. And I don't mind if you judge me, in case if the story needs work. Also, in this version, Sonic wear clothes! Even Sally. That's all.

[Uncle Ben]

Sounds cool

[Robthe1st]

Sounds cool

Thanks Is there any errors? I mean, Sonic wear clothes in this version.

If it does become a real anime series, will you watch something like that? I'm sure Sega will never buy this idea, because of the Sonic games, and the Archie Comics will never put this as a next chapter, unless if it's more like kiddy crap as they always do. This series is really for teenagers 13 and up and something make this story serious mature for adults.

Maybe you or somebody else will like to help me with this project. This may be fan fiction, but it's just for fun

[Uncle Ben]

I would give it a look. But if they pull something like Sonic X i may not be able to continue to watch it.

Take a look at mine on here as well

[Robthe1st]

I would give it a look. But if they pull something like Sonic X i may not be able to continue to watch it.

Take a look at mine on here as well

I'll look at your story that you posted before.

And no, it will not be like Sonic X at all! Let's just say in my dreams, the makers from Fullmetal Alchemist tv series (From the anime company call: BONES) will be involve making the cartoon Only in my dreams Yep...

[Uncle Ben]

haha

[Robthe1st]

I'll try to send my fanfic script here sooner... or later. I'm sure most of u like might like the pilot or not.

[Uncle Ben]

boss.

Ever take a look at mine

[Robthe1st]

boss.

Ever take a look at mine

I've did. I post the comment on your topic.