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[chief]

Talk about the second short here. Yayy.

[Gojira007]

The art is just fucking gorgeous. I'm literally floored. Superb work, Glitcher me boyo. ^^

[Bakuda]

I had to double-take on that second panel...looked like Bunnie was on the toilet. Anyway...interesting beginning...can't wait to see where it goes. And fabulous artwork Glitcher!!!

[chief]

Glitchers art sucks

[RedMenace]

Glitchers art sucks

Always gotta be different, huh, Chief? Huh!?

[RedAuthar]

"There are one in every family. Two in mine actually, and they always seem to ruin special occations."
-Zazu (The Lion King)

Chief always reminds me of that line.

[Cheezmatt]

Very, very nice. I like the backgrounds especially: it's so refreshing to see the great locales of the show being used effectively, and drawn so well. You can tell from the first panel it's taking place at Rotor's workshop.

Now if I had any Glitcheresque criticisms, it would be that there's almost too much use of shading and highlights going on, and the shape of Rotor's body. With that out if the way, roll on page 2!

[LaserX5]

Very well done art.

I gotta feeling the experiment is testing the roboticizer.

[Glitcher]

Glitchers art sucks

Thanks, Chief. I was on Cloud 9 until you came and dumped that bucket of ice water on me. What would I do without you?

Now if I had any Glitcheresque criticisms, it would be that there's almost too much use of shading and highlights going on, and the shape of Rotor's body. With that out if the way, roll on page 2!

A fair enough comment. I have an infuriating habit to get caught up in my shading and paint contrast severely overwrought. But what's wrong with Rotor?

Anyway, thanks for the feedback, everyone. I'd discuss the development of the comic, but I'll write it in the comments section of each page, the first of which I've already posted.

[chief]

Glitchers art sucks

Thanks, Chief. I was on Cloud 9 until you came and dumped that bucket of ice water on me. What would I do without you?

A lot of people ask me that very same thing.. Sadly, without me your life would just be worthless. Your welcome

[Kaotix]

So why exactly was Bunnie sitting in a closet and why was she wearing the cloak?

[Cheezmatt]

That's where they lock Bunnie every night. The cloak is the only possession she's allowed to keep.

But what's wrong with Rotor?

It's a bit hard to explain, but the tapered shape of his body is meant to be much more apparent. His torso reaches all the way to his feet and blends with the upper legs for a triangular sort of shape. The other point is that his arms are still meant to taper to his wrists. It makes for quite a different look than the Sea3on page here. Some screengrabs showing it off: 1, 2 and 3. Not to single your work out of everyone else's, but since we're here...

[saber16]

Glitchers art sucks

Hey, you guy's are paying for said sucky art

I'm loving the style, Glitcher.

[randomizer]

Once again Rotor clearly did not RTFM.

[John Roberts]

So why exactly was Bunnie sitting in a closet and why was she wearing the cloak?

She's a lesbian Jedi.

[Cheezmatt]

Okay, this second page is fantastic. Crazy, awesome work.

[Kaotix]

So a Thomas Riker storyline? Or perhaps a good Bunnie/ evil Bunnie storyline? Interesting.

[Inhibitor]

Simply a digital masterpiece. :3 The lighting effects in the second page really amazed me. The writing is pure SatAM too, couldn't have asked for a better combination. I get the feeling we'll be having a TAIL of two bunnies! HAR HAR HAR

[Metallou]

Promising good story?
Amazing art?

Put together?



That last page is great. I'm out of word to describe it so don't hit me.

[Glitcher]

So why exactly was Bunnie sitting in a closet and why was she wearing the cloak?

As I mentioned in the comments section, it's just a cabin where Bunnie is waiting (and praying) for her operation. As I thought you could tell from the downpour on the first panel and the puddle under Bunnie's feet, the cloak is actually a raincoat.

It's a bit hard to explain, but the tapered shape of his body is meant to be much more apparent. His torso reaches all the way to his feet and blends with the upper legs for a triangular sort of shape. The other point is that his arms are still meant to taper to his wrists. It makes for quite a different look than the Sea3on page here. Some screengrabs showing it off: 1, 2 and 3. Not to single your work out of everyone else's, but since we're here...

It's funny you should mention that. When I first drew this page, I followed Rotor's character model scrupulously as you can see from this early sketch:



I think this is closer to what you mean. But as I progressed on the comic, I started to notice that Rotor looked kinda goofy and out of place in the story. SatAM didn't always have the best artwork and I was convinced I could draw the characters better than the animators without venturing into some of the wilder designs from Archie's comics (Al Bigley, anyone?). So I went back and redrew Rotor to what you see now. I believe the more even proportions make the somersaults and acrobatics he performs on later pages seem more plausible.


You know, when I was drawing this page, John posted a thread in the Creative Corner that included a comic featuring Rotor's attempt to deroboticise Bunnie. The similarities between his comic and mine are extraordinary and convinced me that John strongarmed Jim Doe into writing a script that expanded his story. He really is a manipulative bastard.