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[furrykef]

What's this forum about?

[Glitcher]

What is this site about?

[Jim Doe]

So this is that "internet" thing I keep hearing about, is it? Neat. What's it do?

[chief]

The internet is for porn

[Gojira007]

[Glitcher]

And so our second issue begins!

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The internet is for porn

How did it come to this?

[Gojira007]

Because this discussion was held on the Internet. Erego, it inevitably led to pr0n.

[chief]

Just your average topic derailment.

[randomizer]

How did it come to this?

Did you not watch the video?

[John Roberts]

I like Sally's subtle reservations in that last panel concerning Tails on the mission. Nice little moments like that is what I dig.

[randomizer]

Panel 3 seems to have a case of the covered up speech bubble.

[Kaotix]

Outstanding! Let's bring a small child on a recon mission against a powerful being we really know nothing about! I see no way this could possibly go wrong!

For all of their smarts, the freedom fighters continually make boneheaded descisions for their mission parties. Sonic is stupid for saying Tails can go. Sally is even worse for not immediately disagreeing with it and laying out logical reasons for why Tails should not go.

But then again, Tails is probably a much better choice than Antoine.

Canonically, this is right on par with the series. They're all children and children make stupid descisions all the time.

[Gojira007]

Tails is too adorable on this page.

[Jim Doe]

Panel 3 se-

Yo, randomizer, I'm real happy for ya, and I'ma let you finish, but covered up speech bubble is Sonic interrupting Sally and drowning out/overriding what she's sayin'!

[Gojira007]

Today's page makes me very happy. I really love how sala handled Sonic 'n' Sal's shifting emotions on this one.

[Glitcher]

I remember during the first chapter, there was some spud called 'sonxsalforever' or something like that who begged for a scene where Sonic and Sally kiss. I know he'll be very happy with this page.

Strange, however, that Sonic and Sally are darkened in the last panel when they don't appear to be in the shadow of the trees. And is it just me, or does Rotor look oddly squashed in the first panel? Drawing a character close to the edge can have that effect, Salamander. On the plus side, the inking looks significantly improved. What's your secret?

[Gojira007]

I remember during the first chapter, there was some spud called 'sonxsalforever' or something like that who begged for a scene where Sonic and Sally kiss. I know he'll be very happy with this page.

a.) Spud. Hee. <3

b.) He didn't beg for A SonSal kiss. He begged for SonSal kissing to be the whole of the Comic. lD;

c.) If I were a betting man, I'd wager good money he's not even going to comment on this page, let alone see it. X3

[salamander]

I remember during the first chapter, there was some spud called 'sonxsalforever' or something like that who begged for a scene where Sonic and Sally kiss. I know he'll be very happy with this page.

Strange, however, that Sonic and Sally are darkened in the last panel when they don't appear to be in the shadow of the trees. And is it just me, or does Rotor look oddly squashed in the first panel? Drawing a character close to the edge can have that effect, Salamander. On the plus side, the inking looks significantly improved. What's your secret?

All I could think of when drawing Rotor was "god he looks stoned", and wondering if I should keep him like that since Rotor is a pretty chill dude anyway.
My inking secret- switched to a smaller tip pen, and turned down the opacity of the linework slightly. I finally figured out that when there's a lot of colour and shading, the lines should be thinner and more faint, so they don't clash. Looking back at my references for inks, old print comics mostly, the inking was bigger and had more depth, since the colours were minimal or nonexistant. These examples for instance- minimal/no backgrounds, pale colours and no shading- so the inks are dominant.
Seems obvious now, but oh well. I guess I'll save fancy big inking for another comic.

[chief]

Hahaha, when I first saw this I was thinking "All he needs is blood shot eyes..". Then I just read your reply now and laughed that you think you drew him stonned too. Looks great though. And yes, he is a pretty layed back guy.

[John Roberts]

Another solid page. The writing and the art brings this comic alive that little bit more each time, getting to the point where it is finding it's own voice - if that makes any bloody sense to anyone else.