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Sonic The Hedgehog - War For Mobius

Started by RedAuthar, Oct 11 2012 10:24 PM
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#1 RedAuthar

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Posted 11 October 2012 - 10:24 PM

Well after talking to others about their writing projects and in a vain attempt to revive the Fan Fic writers of FUS I present to you my first official Fan Fiction.

The Story War for Mobius is my own Sonic universe, taking elements from Sonic SatAM, The Games, and the Archie Sonic Comics. It will also feature elements to a lesser extent from Sonic Underground, AoStH, and Sonic the Comic.

The Story is to be divided into acts that will tell the main story, with a few side-stories updated when I feel like going off on a tangent.

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Hopefully I don't need to say this but please be respectful about your comments. I mean if I didn't want comments I wouldn't post it, but I don't want to waste my time with a bunch of "This Sucks because I don't like it" comments. Please provide reasons and constructive criticisms. And if spelling gets funky....forgive me as my Laptop only has WordPad which apparently does not have a Spell Check. Hopefully I'll get to run it through a Spell Check before updating but who knows.

Anyways...
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Act 1 Cover

War For Mobius (FanFiction.Net Link (Full Story when Up To Date))

(Apparently I'm only allowed Ten pages on Webs. So everything past Chapter 4 is only on Deviant Art and FanFiction.Net)
Act One (Deviant Art Link)
-Chapter One - Deviant Art Version (FanFic Version)
-Chapter Two - Deviant Art Version (added 10/19/12) (FanFic Version)
-Chapter Three - Deviant Art Version (added 11/27/12) (FanFic Version)
-Chapter Four - Deviant Art Version (added 12/03/2012) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Five (added 1/22/13) (FanFic Version)
-Chapter Six (added 4/5/2013) (FanFic Version)
-Chapter Seven (added 4/7/2013) (FanFic Version)
-Chapter Eight (added 5/11/2013) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Nine (Uploaded earlier but linked: 7/17/2013) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Ten (7/17/2013) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Eleven (7/20/13) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twelve (8/31/13) (FanFic Version)

 

-Chapter Thirteen (1/07/2014) (Deviant Art Version)

-Chapter Fourteen (5/20/2014) (Deviant Art Version)

-Chapter Fifteen (7/21/2014) (Deviant Art Version)

-Chapter Sixteen (8/1/2014) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Seventeen (8/3/2014) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Eighteen (9/8/2014) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Nineteen (Uh...Sept 2014) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twenty (10/31/2014) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twenty-one (11/18/2014) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twenty-Two (11/23/2014) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twenty-Three (02/20/2015) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twenty-Four (02/20/2015) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twenty-Five (04/18/2015) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twenty-Six (04/18/2015) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twenty-Seven (07/25/2015) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twenty-Eight (08/30/2015) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Twenty-Nine (12/14/15) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Thirty (12/28/15) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Thirty-One (Sometime between these two) (FanFic Version)

-Chapter Thirty-Two (06/16/16) (FanFic Version)

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WfM Side Stories (FanFiction.net version)  Now Defunct.  Replaced with Shorts.  

 

- Friendship, Duty, Sacrifice Part 001 (7/14/2013)

- Friendship, Duty, Sacrifice Part 002 (8/11/2013)

- Robotnik Labs Catalog 001 (8/11/2013)

- Dark Rain (8/11/2013)

-HOBBIES (1/1/2014)

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WfM Short Stories - Replaces Side Stories.  

 

-HOBBIES Redux (07/11/17)

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And because I don't wanna make a new Topic for it.....
Mega Man OMEGA X
-Prologue and Chapter One (added 5/11/2013)

 

StarCraft on Liberty's Wings (10/2/2013) 

Deviant Art Chapters:

-Chapter One

-Chapter Two

-Chapter Three

 

Star Fox - Mercenary Pilots

Airborne:

Chapter 000


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Posted 12 October 2012 - 08:51 AM

Pretty Cool, don't read the spoiler, unless you've read the story so far, it's called a spoiler because it is a spoiler.

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 08:55 AM

Spoiler

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 08:59 AM

pretty good man

The Scribes, if anyone wants to join a growing community. Ask me if you want to know more.

 

“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

Bearing with one another and, if one has a complaint against another, forgiving each other; as the Lord has forgiven you, so you also must forgive. -Colossians 3:13

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 09:04 AM

Thanks.

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Posted 19 October 2012 - 11:48 AM

Put up Chapter 2 of War for Mobius.

Also added a FAQs Section on the site.

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Posted 19 October 2012 - 12:02 PM

another good one bro

The Scribes, if anyone wants to join a growing community. Ask me if you want to know more.

 

“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

Bearing with one another and, if one has a complaint against another, forgiving each other; as the Lord has forgiven you, so you also must forgive. -Colossians 3:13

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Posted 19 October 2012 - 12:02 PM

Also added a cast page, but to avoid spoilers it doesn't have much yet.

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Posted 19 October 2012 - 12:06 PM

who's Johnny based off of

The Scribes, if anyone wants to join a growing community. Ask me if you want to know more.

 

“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

Bearing with one another and, if one has a complaint against another, forgiving each other; as the Lord has forgiven you, so you also must forgive. -Colossians 3:13

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Posted 19 October 2012 - 12:14 PM

These guys:
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Pocky (GAMES)_____________________________Johnny Lightfoot (Fleetway Comic)

Now I never Read Sonic the Comic (only the Archie Sonic Comics) so I don't know much about him in that. However the name is also the English Name for Pocky the Rabbit from Sonic 1. Basically I merged the two and then changed them to fit how I viewed them.

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Posted 19 October 2012 - 08:26 PM

aha ok

The Scribes, if anyone wants to join a growing community. Ask me if you want to know more.

 

“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

Bearing with one another and, if one has a complaint against another, forgiving each other; as the Lord has forgiven you, so you also must forgive. -Colossians 3:13

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 08:02 PM

After a long hiatus....not all that long I guess here's Chapter 3.

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 08:25 PM

Also you can now read them on Deviant art.
http://theredauthar....allery/40844012

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 08:30 PM

i like how i insult Ant'

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“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

Bearing with one another and, if one has a complaint against another, forgiving each other; as the Lord has forgiven you, so you also must forgive. -Colossians 3:13

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 08:39 PM

I couldn't think of any other way to introduce Ben...

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 08:44 PM

i like it. Couldda called him a French wuss too

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“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

Bearing with one another and, if one has a complaint against another, forgiving each other; as the Lord has forgiven you, so you also must forgive. -Colossians 3:13

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 08:45 PM

Trying to be politically correct.

That and Though he speaks French he is on Mobius....so there potentially is no France.

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 08:47 PM

very true.

couldda always say how the way he acts he will never be Captain of the guard

The Scribes, if anyone wants to join a growing community. Ask me if you want to know more.

 

“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

Bearing with one another and, if one has a complaint against another, forgiving each other; as the Lord has forgiven you, so you also must forgive. -Colossians 3:13

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 08:52 PM

I also don't want Ben to look like a jerk....

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 08:56 PM

true

The Scribes, if anyone wants to join a growing community. Ask me if you want to know more.

 

“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

Bearing with one another and, if one has a complaint against another, forgiving each other; as the Lord has forgiven you, so you also must forgive. -Colossians 3:13

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