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Not bad. Would be neat if my grandpa makes it that old.

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I hope I get to live to 93.

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Sorry to hear, Wulfsbane. My condolences.

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My grandfather passed on the 17th.

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This year's Thanksgiving was a lot tougher than normal.

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Same to you.

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Sally acorn painting you can try to follow along, needs re-voicing as its just me for now.

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#21 TheRedStranger

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Posted 04 September 2013 - 07:52 PM

So whats the timeframe we agreed upon?? Few days to a week?

 

For communal reviews. Individuals can do person to person reviews more often. 

 

 What would be the best review perameters, things we all have to cover?



#22 Wulfsbane

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Posted 04 September 2013 - 07:57 PM

 

So whats the timeframe we agreed upon?? Few days to a week?

 

For communal reviews. Individuals can do person to person reviews more often. 

 

 What would be the best review perameters, things we all have to cover?

 

 

Structure, use of grammar, flow, content, emotion, detail, etc.


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“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

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#23 TheRedStranger

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Posted 04 September 2013 - 08:13 PM

Conception:

Plot:

Characters:

Prose (retorical techniques, pacing, grammar, ect.):

Subtext:

 

 Good rule of thumb for the structure. 

 

 Recap/Summary

 Critique

 Conclusion.

 

Make sure to warn people about Spoilers!

 

You can give people A-U Rating. No failures, just uncomplete. If they fail they can always make it better. Don't pull punches but don't discourage them from pressing on and progressing in their craft.



#24 Wulfsbane

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Posted 04 September 2013 - 08:29 PM

Right. Now VHS threw his fan fic into the fire consideration so lets start with his


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“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

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#25 TheRedStranger

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Posted 04 September 2013 - 08:56 PM

Right. Now VHS threw his fan fic into the fire consideration so lets start with his

 

Go for it.



#26 Wulfsbane

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Posted 04 September 2013 - 08:58 PM

Stranger you wanna go first in the review or someone else wanna start with a review


The Scribes, if anyone wants to join a growing community. Ask me if you want to know more.

 

“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

Bearing with one another and, if one has a complaint against another, forgiving each other; as the Lord has forgiven you, so you also must forgive. -Colossians 3:13


#27 TheRedStranger

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Posted 04 September 2013 - 09:00 PM

Stranger you wanna go first in the review or someone else wanna start with a review

 

 

I guess I'll take the plunge. I shall lead by example.

 

 Expect a review by around Saturday.



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Posted 04 September 2013 - 09:04 PM

 

Stranger you wanna go first in the review or someone else wanna start with a review

 

 

I guess I'll take the plunge. I shall lead by example.

 

 Expect a review by around Saturday.

 

 

I would but i got moving stuff to do


The Scribes, if anyone wants to join a growing community. Ask me if you want to know more.

 

“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

Bearing with one another and, if one has a complaint against another, forgiving each other; as the Lord has forgiven you, so you also must forgive. -Colossians 3:13


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Posted 04 September 2013 - 11:23 PM

This thread sounds quite promising. I myself have been working on a story, my first serious attempt at creative writing in who knows how many years, over the past few months, and am hoping to have the first chapter finished by SatAM's 20th anniversary. I was leaning toward holding off on posting it until the entire work is finished, which could very well take a year or more, but a critique thread could be quite helpful. It would also help me get involved more with the community, something I've been meaning to do. Finally, it would provide incentive to write at a faster pace.

 

I'll try to post some feedback on the first story this weekend. Mind you, I'm entirely unfamiliar with Gremlins, so my comments will be focused more on technique and writing mechanics than plot.


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Posted 05 September 2013 - 01:06 AM

 

 

Stranger you wanna go first in the review or someone else wanna start with a review

 

 

I guess I'll take the plunge. I shall lead by example.

 

 Expect a review by around Saturday.

 

 

I would but i got moving stuff to do

 

 

College does that. I understand.

 

 Don't bust your back while movin', dude.


This thread sounds quite promising. I myself have been working on a story, my first serious attempt at creative writing in who knows how many years, over the past few months, and am hoping to have the first chapter finished by SatAM's 20th anniversary. I was leaning toward holding off on posting it until the entire work is finished, which could very well take a year or more, but a critique thread could be quite helpful. It would also help me get involved more with the community, something I've been meaning to do. Finally, it would provide incentive to write at a faster pace.

 

I'll try to post some feedback on the first story this weekend. Mind you, I'm entirely unfamiliar with Gremlins, so my comments will be focused more on technique and writing mechanics than plot.

 

 Exactly! I welcome you to the cult club!  :awesome:

 

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Posted 05 September 2013 - 12:53 PM

This thread sounds quite promising. I myself have been working on a story, my first serious attempt at creative writing in who knows how many years, over the past few months, and am hoping to have the first chapter finished by SatAM's 20th anniversary. I was leaning toward holding off on posting it until the entire work is finished, which could very well take a year or more, but a critique thread could be quite helpful. It would also help me get involved more with the community, something I've been meaning to do. Finally, it would provide incentive to write at a faster pace.
 
I'll try to post some feedback on the first story this weekend. Mind you, I'm entirely unfamiliar with Gremlins, so my comments will be focused more on technique and writing mechanics than plot.


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Posted 05 September 2013 - 02:36 PM

This thread sounds quite promising. I myself have been working on a story, my first serious attempt at creative writing in who knows how many years, over the past few months, and am hoping to have the first chapter finished by SatAM's 20th anniversary. I was leaning toward holding off on posting it until the entire work is finished, which could very well take a year or more, but a critique thread could be quite helpful. It would also help me get involved more with the community, something I've been meaning to do. Finally, it would provide incentive to write at a faster pace.
 
I'll try to post some feedback on the first story this weekend. Mind you, I'm entirely unfamiliar with Gremlins, so my comments will be focused more on technique and writing mechanics than plot.


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#33 Wulfsbane

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Posted 05 September 2013 - 02:58 PM

i think it would be wise to watch it to understand his plot but Wikipedia summary can work just fine


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“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

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Posted 05 September 2013 - 03:57 PM

I've actually made the story a good start for Gremlins-newbies. You're still screwed if you know nothing about Sonic.
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Posted 05 September 2013 - 05:34 PM

I've actually made the story a good start for Gremlins-newbies. You're still screwed if you know nothing about Sonic.

 

Right we are here on a Sonic community forum knowing nothing of Sonic


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“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

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Posted 05 September 2013 - 06:09 PM

He's the red one with two tails, right?


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Posted 05 September 2013 - 06:12 PM

naw i think hes the purple one thats a bat


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“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

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#38 Captain Sorzo

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Posted 05 September 2013 - 06:58 PM

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This guy?


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#39 Wulfsbane

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Posted 05 September 2013 - 07:01 PM

Yes him


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“Some say that he is the only man in history to buy a DFS sofa when there wasn’t a sale on, and that his favourite boxing venue is Munich airport. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

“Some say that if you hold him in the wrong way he doesn’t work properly, and that just very recently he developed an irrational hatred of Rubens Barrichello. All we know is he’s called the Stig.”

 

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#40 ILOVEVHS

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Posted 05 September 2013 - 07:09 PM

I'm pretty sure Sonic is the one with the mustache and the Italian accent.
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